tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post3072914094459012485..comments2011-01-03T05:45:21.588-07:00Comments on CRMS Calculus 2010: Scribe Post Feb 19thBruhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00445757737038941900noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-56260972862223286962010-02-26T12:39:58.533-07:002010-02-26T12:39:58.533-07:00Hyunhwa,
Your post is very clearly organized. I p...Hyunhwa,<br /><br />Your post is very clearly organized. I particularly like the use of color to highlight important things. <br /><br />In order to show how both the radius and the area are functions of time, it might help to include multiple representations of this idea. You could include a data table (numerical) or a picture/diagram (visual) that could help the reader understand that both the radius and the area are changing with respect to time.<br /><br />This might support your verbal and algebraic explanations of this challenging idea.<br /><br />Great work!<br /><br />SKSSKShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00684070871657187046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-34662255962467407762010-02-22T21:15:04.079-07:002010-02-22T21:15:04.079-07:00Wow, two great posts in one week. Something is up ...Wow, two great posts in one week. Something is up here. I want to point out that you and I like the same kind of formatting, although everything that I made a mistake on you got right! I have to tell you that my favorite part about your post was the last sentance of your paragraph, that you are so willing to help is great and I know you will help if you can. This post was a job well done and the only thing I can add is that from your post you sound very much in a rush, don't forget to stop and smell the roses. <br /><br />Have a wonderful night!<br /><br /><br />BestonBestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05290985366554110660noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-56368760303310880882010-02-22T07:59:29.741-07:002010-02-22T07:59:29.741-07:00That was a great post, I really enjoyed reading it...That was a great post, I really enjoyed reading it. Although I had already done the problem by the time that I read it, it still clarified some tough topics. You possibly could have chosen a different problem than the example that we did, but i still think that you did a great job. And because you chose the problem we did it was easier to understand where you were coming from in your directions. This was a very thorough, and helpful scribe post. Good job.flying slughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07817015602372891184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-26205060047534161632010-02-21T22:42:37.585-07:002010-02-21T22:42:37.585-07:00Nice post, really easy to understand it's conc...Nice post, really easy to understand it's concise, but has adequate information to recall what happened in class. I like how you paid special attention to deriving implicit functions since it's a really confusing subject. It might have been helpful to include another example, maybe one from the homework packet or the book just to solidify the information again.blitzenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02942728397445326838noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-13808231937119820172010-02-21T20:35:53.129-07:002010-02-21T20:35:53.129-07:00I think I have nothing to say. This post is so awe...I think I have nothing to say. This post is so awesome. So many details I have never thought about. A lot of colors highlight the most important things. Nice organization and clear explanation. Great job! I tried so hard to find a flaw or a little unclear part, however, I failed. Nice job! I think you provided not only us but also yourself a great chance of reviewing and catching up. Thank you.YDplusSBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133765178448567641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-18485078456476270632010-02-21T18:41:24.910-07:002010-02-21T18:41:24.910-07:00awesome post! it was really helpful for me that yo...awesome post! it was really helpful for me that you put a review first thing in your post. I am not the elephant Bru wishes i was, so it is good to remember the main themes of the class before i do my homework. It was also great that you had a clear set of answers from the exploration. A little more explanation about the steps to each answer would be nice, but otherwise you have a solid post. Bravo!Joanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02376671073308935205noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-66313559017178395652010-02-21T18:23:04.749-07:002010-02-21T18:23:04.749-07:00Hey Hyunhwa! I enjoyed reading your scribe post, a...Hey Hyunhwa! I enjoyed reading your scribe post, and I understand what you're saying throughout the post. Yes you explained 'the hardest part of this exploration,' but considering someone who didn't see this in class, I think it would be better to explain the steps before the final answer is given. <br /><br />Oh! also, I like the picture you used as your introduction. Moreover, it's always good to insert a review part in the post. <br />Great job!Marleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00933612052368318411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3862070466581846873.post-76406034182747159302010-02-21T17:31:44.876-07:002010-02-21T17:31:44.876-07:00Hey Hyunhwa, great post. Good use of colors and o...Hey Hyunhwa, great post. Good use of colors and of the equation editor. I think the one bump in this post is when you explain the implicit differentiation of the equation for area of a circle. You say that both variables are composed with t, and although I know what you are trying to say because I was in class, I think the whole explanation comes off a bit unclear. Were you trying to say something more along the lines of 'you are deriving both variables with respect to time?' Also, I think it could have been helpful to juxtapose an example of deriving 'A' with respect to 'r' in addition to this one which is with respect to 't.' But other than this that, great job!dammitimmadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17874746889704333355noreply@blogger.com